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Writer's pictureFaiz Faisal

Sunday Short: The Final Gift


Hands holding out a gift

The evening breeze carried a gentle coolness through the quiet streets of the small Malaysian suburb where Amir lived. The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the modest home he had built for himself and his daughter, Aisha. The house, once filled with the warmth of family dinners and laughter, was now silent more often than not—except when Aisha came home from university, her voice filling the space with energy that Amir cherished.


Amir sat at the kitchen table, sipping his tea. His hands were rough, worn from years of long hours at the factory. He hid the exhaustion well; it was the one thing he never let slip around Aisha. She had grown up thinking everything was fine, that their life was as ordinary as anyone else's. But what she didn’t know—what he made sure she never saw—was the late nights, the extra shifts, and the deep, throbbing pain in his chest that he could no longer ignore.


It had started a year ago. A dull ache at first, one he pushed aside like every other discomfort that came with aging. But the doctor’s quiet tone after the tests confirmed his fears. The cancer had spread, and while there were treatments, the cost was more than Amir could bear. He couldn’t let Aisha know. She had already lost her mother. Aisha was just a baby when her mother passed during childbirth, leaving Amir to raise her alone. From that moment on, Aisha had become the center of his world. He promised her mother he would make sure their daughter had the life she deserved, no matter the cost.


And he did.


Every morning, Amir woke before dawn, heading to the factory for his first shift, then worked afternoons at a nearby construction site. He took on every available hour, every opportunity to save, to build a future for Aisha. She was in her final year of university, studying law—her dream, one he had quietly supported even when the tuition fees piled up. The smile on her face when she told him about her latest achievements was worth every hour spent away from her, every sleepless night.


But the truth was catching up with him. His body was failing, and he knew his time was limited. His breaths were shorter now, the pain harder to bear. But he wouldn’t let her see. Not yet.


The door clicked open, and Aisha’s voice broke through the silence. "Dad? You home?"


“In the kitchen,” Amir called, his voice steady as ever.


Aisha entered, her face lighting up when she saw him. “You didn’t have to wait up for me,” she said, leaning down to kiss his cheek. She smelled like rain, her hair damp from the evening downpour. “I was studying late at the library.”


Amir smiled, the corners of his eyes crinkling. “I’ll always wait up for you, Aisha.”


They sat together for a while, talking about her day, her classes, the future she was so excited about. Amir listened, his heart full but heavy. He knew he wouldn’t be there to see her graduate, to walk her down the aisle someday, to meet the children she might have. But he also knew he had done everything he could to make sure she would be okay without him.


As the clock ticked on, Aisha yawned. “I’m going to bed, Dad. You should too—you look tired.”


Amir nodded. “I will soon.”


She kissed him goodnight and disappeared down the hall. Amir sat for a long time in the quiet, staring at the financial papers spread across the table. He had done it. He had saved enough. She would have the house, the savings, everything she needed to finish school and live comfortably. But he wouldn’t be there to see it.


The pain in his chest flared, sharper than ever, but he welcomed it now. His part was done.


The next morning, Aisha found him. He was still in his chair, his face peaceful, the tea cup empty beside him.


Grief came crashing down around her, tearing at the world she thought she knew. How had she not seen it? How had he kept all of this from her? As the days passed, she discovered the extent of his sacrifice—the long hours, the extra shifts, the illness he had hidden from her. He had given her everything, even when it meant giving up his own time with her.


Aisha stood at his grave a week later, the weight of his final gift sinking in. She wasn’t ready to live without him, but she knew that was exactly why he had done what he did. So she wouldn’t have to struggle, so she could keep going, even when he couldn’t be there.


Tears blurred her vision as she whispered, “Thank you, Dad. I’ll make you proud.”


And in the quiet, with the breeze rustling the trees, she felt his presence, a soft reminder that his love was still with her, even if he was not.

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