Sunday Short: The Girl Who Can't See Ghosts
- Faiz Faisal

- Jul 26
- 4 min read
The Worst Haunting Ever
Moving to New York with two suitcases, one keyboard, and exactly $1,486.23 in her bank account wasn't how Evelyn Brooks imagined starting adulthood.
Then again, neither was getting rejected by thirty-seven apartment listings before someone finally looked at her résumé and said,
"The place isn't... exactly popular."
Popular wasn't something Evelyn could afford.
The townhouse sat quietly between two newer apartment buildings in Brooklyn, almost as if the city had forgotten it existed. Three stories of faded brick, ivy crawling through cracked walls, crooked windows, and a rusty front gate that squeaked dramatically every time the wind nudged it.
It looked like the kind of house horror movies loved.
To Evelyn...
It was simply affordable.
The landlord barely tried to convince her.
"The plumbing works."
"Mostly."
"The heater has... moods."
"And if anyone asks, you've never met me."
Evelyn laughed.
"For this rent? I'd live with raccoons."
She signed the lease before he could change his mind.
The ghost had been dead for seventy-three years.
And in those seventy-three years, Oliver Ashcroft had become exceptionally good at exactly one thing.
Making people leave.
He had terrified honeymooners.
College students.
A retired magician.
Three influencers who insisted on filming a "24 Hours in the Most Haunted House in Brooklyn" challenge.
One lasted eleven minutes.
Oliver was still proud of that.
Then Evelyn Brooks moved in.
By sunset on her first day, Oliver was already planning his masterpiece.
Evelyn unpacked slowly.
She didn't rush.
Instead, she explored the apartment one room at a time.
Her fingertips traced along every wall.
She measured each doorway with careful steps.
"Kitchen..."
Three steps.
"Sink..."
Another two.
She smiled softly.
"Got it."
Oliver watched from the ceiling.
"...What is she doing?"
Every plate went into the same cupboard.
Every mug had its own shelf.
Her keys rested in a small ceramic bowl beside the entrance.
She paused after placing each item, reaching back for it a second time before nodding to herself.
As though she was memorizing where everything belonged.
Oliver shrugged.
Humans were strange.
The first haunting began precisely at 2:13 in the morning.
Oliver slammed every cabinet door in the kitchen.
BANG.
BANG.
BANG.
BANG.
Silence.
Then, from the bedroom...
"...Old house."
A sleepy sigh.
"...Guess the hinges need oil."
She rolled over.
And continued sleeping.
Oliver floated motionless.
"Seriously?"
Night Two.
He chose something more dramatic.
Every light in the apartment flickered wildly.
The old fluorescent bulb above the kitchen buzzed loudly, clicking faster and faster until it sounded like an angry swarm of bees.
Evelyn stopped unpacking.
She tilted her head.
Listened.
"...That doesn't sound healthy."
She made a mental note.
"Need to call the landlord about the wiring."
Oliver frowned.
She hadn't even looked up.
Fine.
Psychological horror.
His specialty.
While Evelyn was at work the next day, Oliver spent nearly an hour writing enormous dripping letters across the bathroom mirror.
GET.
OUT.
He admired his work.
Sharp edges.
Perfect spacing.
Absolutely terrifying.
That evening, Evelyn wandered into the bathroom carrying a damp cloth.
Without hesitation, she wiped the mirror clean from top to bottom.
Oliver gasped.
"...I spent an hour on that."
The haunting grew increasingly desperate.
Oliver whispered outside her bedroom.
She assumed the old pipes were groaning.
He knocked over a dining chair.
She blamed the uneven floorboards.
He played eerie piano notes in the middle of the night.
Instead of screaming...
She smiled in her sleep.
"...Nice melody."
Nice melody?
It was supposed to sound cursed.
By the sixth day, Oliver was exhausted.
He sat dramatically on top of the refrigerator, elbows on knees.
"I've lost it."
"I've officially forgotten how to haunt people."
Saturday morning brought a visitor.
An elderly woman carrying a warm apple pie knocked on Evelyn's front door.
"I'm Mrs. Alvarez from next door."
"It's lovely to meet you."
"You too."
Mrs. Alvarez hesitated.
"I hope you don't mind me asking..."
"How have your first few days been?"
Evelyn smiled.
"I think I'm finally settling in."
Mrs. Alvarez looked genuinely surprised.
"You... are?"
"Of course."
"I like it here."
The older woman lowered her voice.
"You know..."
"Nobody has stayed in this house longer than a week."
Evelyn laughed.
"Really?"
"They all claimed it was haunted."
"They heard footsteps upstairs."
"Doors slamming."
"Whispering."
"One tenant even swore he saw a young man standing in the hallway."
Oliver straightened proudly.
Finally.
Someone appreciated his work.
Mrs. Alvarez leaned in.
"You haven't noticed anything?"
Evelyn thought for a moment.
"...Well..."
"The pipes complain a lot."
"The floorboards squeak."
"The wiring definitely needs replacing."
"But nothing unusual."
Oliver blinked.
Nothing... unusual?
Mrs. Alvarez frowned.
"So you haven't... seen anything?"
Evelyn chuckled.
"I'm probably the worst person to ask."
Mrs. Alvarez assumed she meant she wasn't easily frightened.
"Oh."
"Fair enough."
That evening, rain drummed softly against the windows.
Evelyn finished unpacking the final cardboard box.
Oliver watched absentmindedly from the staircase.
She reached inside and carefully unfolded something white.
Click.
Click.
Click.
A long white cane.
Oliver froze.
Evelyn stood quietly for a moment before taking a slow breath.
Then she gently tapped the floor ahead of her.
Tap.
Tap.
Tap.
Her free hand slid lightly along the hallway wall as she counted.
"Five steps to the kitchen..."
She smiled.
"I'll get there eventually."
Oliver felt something sink inside him.
The cabinets.
The mirror.
The lights.
The footsteps.
She hadn't ignored any of it.
She simply...
Couldn't see.
Suddenly every strange habit made sense.
The careful counting.
The fingertips gliding across the walls.
The way she'd memorized every cupboard before unpacking it.
The reason she never once commented on how old the house looked.
Oliver looked around the apartment.
For the first time in seventy-three years...
The house didn't feel haunted.
It felt lonely.
He watched Evelyn accidentally reach past the mug she wanted.
Her fingers searched empty air.
Without thinking, Oliver gently nudged the mug across the counter.
Just enough.
Her fingertips found it immediately.
She paused.
A tiny smile spread across her face.
"...Lucky."
Oliver quickly pulled his hand back.
"...Yeah."
He whispered to himself.
"Lucky."
For the first time since becoming a ghost...
Oliver stopped wondering how to make someone leave.
Instead...
He found himself wondering how someone so brave had learned to face the world completely on her own.
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